tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6535397679761340749.post6236530540223020581..comments2023-10-26T07:31:05.683-07:00Comments on Adam Stone BA Hons Computer Animation Arts - UCA Rochester: The Secret Life of a House Robot: Post Pitch Previs Version 5Adam Stonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16161723731400033219noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6535397679761340749.post-77255761706880816772015-11-16T08:33:02.421-08:002015-11-16T08:33:02.421-08:00Establishing shot - POV of owner; disengage POV on...Establishing shot - POV of owner; disengage POV once Robot is in room and listening; convey exit of owner via sound. <br /><br />Get rid of remote throw.<br /><br />Show switching back on television.<br /><br />Consider intercutting television shots with montage shots - slow it down some more!<br /><br />Delay hoover advert so audience is clear that it is arresting Robot's attention.<br /><br />Show movement of Robot to box.<br /><br />Attach box lid to side!<br /><br />Build more relationship between hoover looking and close-ups of reactions - for example, when hoover is first reveal so delight of Robot, when camera tracks up hoover's body, connect that tracking shot with movement of robot's eyes/head etc. The movement up the hoover is motivated by the robot's POV.<br /><br />Make more of the kissing of the attachment - then transition into dance routine. <br /><br />Consider putting more balletic camera moves into shot to enrich dance sequence (sort out any clunky shots, this should feel very smooth!).<br /><br />tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com