Adam, my initial reaction to your infographic is that there is no underlying logic/ approach driving your graphic design. Unfortunately the result is a film with a fun message but a ‘simplistic’ non-designed visual style. As I mentioned above the heart of the problem is an omission of a fixed ‘logic or approach’ that needed to be born out of your topic and would drive your design work to a place of refinement. For example subject such as romance, valentines cards, or even IKEA instruction manuals cuold have been an option. I’ve listed a few films below in order for you to see where perhaps you’ve made a mistake in your approach to where you may originate graphic designs. There is also a spiteful / immature tone to your film which I suggest was not necessarily the right approach – such as including “You prick” for example?
Adam, my initial reaction to your infographic is that there is no underlying logic/ approach driving your graphic design. Unfortunately the result is a film with a fun message but a ‘simplistic’ non-designed visual style. As I mentioned above the heart of the problem is an omission of a fixed ‘logic or approach’ that needed to be born out of your topic and would drive your design work to a place of refinement. For example subject such as romance, valentines cards, or even IKEA instruction manuals cuold have been an option. I’ve listed a few films below in order for you to see where perhaps you’ve made a mistake in your approach to where you may originate graphic designs. There is also a spiteful / immature tone to your film which I suggest was not necessarily the right approach – such as including “You prick” for example?
ReplyDelete1950’s Boutique
http://liviwilmore.blogspot.co.uk/2015/02/adaptation-anatomy-of-womens-handbag.html
1950’s Sci-Fi
http://dannyrollings.blogspot.co.uk/2015/02/adaption-27-top-10-facts-about-weird.html
Cartoon Science
http://anthonyjfaulkner.blogspot.co.uk/2015/02/adaptation-submission-post-making-of.html
Chalk Board/ Menu /Farm