I just wonder if the opening POV shot is 'too long' anyway - in so much as your story really starts when the robot appears, so perhaps you could get your 'human' to the door a bit faster? I don't know what your plans are re. sound design, so it might be okay as is, but it feels long now.
I assume the pictures etc on the wall are still place-holders? Like I said, there's still an inattention to convincing period detail dogging your interior; and I want to see you getting to grips with it before too long: some ideas for 1970's furnishings that are a bit more on message: string art was a 'thing' in the homes of the 1970s:
In terms of 'ornaments' etc: for some reason, owls were big in the 70s... https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/f7/2b/2f/f72b2f33d9f75ad46d7809e6b8d20798.jpg
also, check out classic 70s ceramics for on shelves etc:
keep on trucking Adam...
ReplyDeleteI just wonder if the opening POV shot is 'too long' anyway - in so much as your story really starts when the robot appears, so perhaps you could get your 'human' to the door a bit faster? I don't know what your plans are re. sound design, so it might be okay as is, but it feels long now.
I assume the pictures etc on the wall are still place-holders? Like I said, there's still an inattention to convincing period detail dogging your interior; and I want to see you getting to grips with it before too long: some ideas for 1970's furnishings that are a bit more on message: string art was a 'thing' in the homes of the 1970s:
http://klat.com/sites/default/files/stringart.jpg
https://img1.etsystatic.com/014/0/7914001/il_570xN.455425915_t1j6.jpg
https://img0.etsystatic.com/011/1/7914001/il_570xN.455410036_q5ac.jpg
As was macrame pot-holders etc:
https://img0.etsystatic.com/033/1/9150698/il_340x270.594874456_dys2.jpg
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/08/70/a6/0870a634369f336e85fe1defdefa4595.jpg
In terms of 'ornaments' etc: for some reason, owls were big in the 70s...
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/f7/2b/2f/f72b2f33d9f75ad46d7809e6b8d20798.jpg
also, check out classic 70s ceramics for on shelves etc:
http://www.rethinkthesink.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/70s-egg-cup.jpg
http://i0.wp.com/hisforhomeblog.com/wp-content/uploads/DSC00968.jpg?resize=432%2C288
I just want you to get to grips with some of this detailing so your world has 'verisimilitude' (look it up!) :)